alright I am collected and prepared for a thorough comment.
the first thing I notice is how I like that you're really starting to work with other color mixes and effects to coloring. The red gradient shade on the wings, for example, as compared to the blue at the bottom. Also Liking how you're applying the shades to the forms of the lines and making the light source very clear.
the only real critique I have is that the boobs seem to be drawn fairly low, and with, what looks like, her shoulder is raise a little, and her other arm is up. With the size they are they would probably be stretched upward a bit more as raising the arm or shoulder lifts them (and when such they only really sag when really big lol)
Personally, I like the wings. When it comes to anime, animal features are almost always exaggerated. But what you did actually strengthened the composition.
you did awesome!^^ srsly i would draw more(better too) if i could post them, but i can't draw like all u good artists..;.; so dont say u did bad on the wings..either that or just keep practicing on them.^^
NeKo~
Last edited by NeKo MoonShine at 8:59:57 AM CST on February 16, 2011.
Hanabusa01
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/17/11 | Reply
It's really good saiyuki-san. I like this very much i hope you'll do better and better and gain much success in life!
JingleStansChibi
Coffee Connoisseur (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/11 | Reply
alright I am collected and prepared for a thorough comment.
the first thing I notice is how I like that you're really starting to work with other color mixes and effects to coloring. The red gradient shade on the wings, for example, as compared to the blue at the bottom. Also Liking how you're applying the shades to the forms of the lines and making the light source very clear.
the only real critique I have is that the boobs seem to be drawn fairly low, and with, what looks like, her shoulder is raise a little, and her other arm is up. With the size they are they would probably be stretched upward a bit more as raising the arm or shoulder lifts them (and when such they only really sag when really big lol)
also.
your clean inking isnt fair ;-;
Kaijin89
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/16/11 | Reply
Personally, I like the wings. When it comes to anime, animal features are almost always exaggerated. But what you did actually strengthened the composition.
NeKo MoonShine
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/16/11 | Reply
you did awesome!^^ srsly i would draw more(better too) if i could post them, but i can't draw like all u good artists..;.; so dont say u did bad on the wings..either that or just keep practicing on them.^^
NeKo~
Last edited by NeKo MoonShine at 8:59:57 AM CST on February 16, 2011.