lol actually I don't know where my description went? Ahha I'll fix that.
Uhm yeah I've never been very good with the wrist/hand area. I actually think the sketch had the other fingers showing too, and it made more sense anatomically, but then when I line arted I some how missed the fingers when I was focusing on the hair ^^' I have to be more careful with that.
And the whole thigh thing... Haha this piece actually was a thank you for someone, who made very inspirational comments on the way today's society views girls... So that's why its a little exaggerated ^^' (Also my legs actually look somewhat like this xDD)
Thank you very much for your comments :) They always let me know what I should be working on next :D This really was an experimentation, and now I know better for the face. I wasn't really sure how to draw in this kind of style very well yet:) Thank you for pointing these things out :D
edit/ oh I just noticed your comment on the eyes/expression hehe xD Really I was trying to draw the eyes smaller than usual, I didn't mean for her to look drunken/drowsy xD They're actually open all the way lol.
Last edited by curlyque64 at 2:15:34 PM CDT on June 6, 2011.
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/06/11 | Reply
I'm wondering why you erased your description from earlier lol, it's not like you said anything bad. It's good that you are aiming to experiment with different styles...but I guess if you aren't a fan of shoujo-style then my art is definitely not your cup of tea huh? xDD
I liked what you had going before, because honestly I found the facial proportions to be better. Here it seems like the nose is too low and curved on the face, but it's an experiment so it's all good.
I like what you tried with the eyes and of course your coloring..it's getting so much better!(I think you're better than me now for sure..) Although I've gotta say the big issue with your art that I'm having as of late is with the anatomy.
For instance, again, take a look at the head. It is quite large in comparison to the rest of her body. The details on the hair are great, and I like what you were trying to do with the hands, however her right hand(our left) seems to be lacking in definition and shape, and looks like it is flipped around. She seems to be a bit lacking in wrists, and the proportions of her thighs are a bit skewed, particularly of her right(our left) leg, which is too thick and curvy at the base of the thigh. But the fixing of anatomy comes with practice, so keep working at it!
Also I'm a bit confused with her expression...because I'm not sure what it's trying to convey. The way you have her eyes somewhat closed makes it seem like she's drowsy, but then I see blush on her face, which kind of gives it a somewhat drunken look as opposed to embarassment or being bashful. I love the details you put in the eyes though, and your work with clothing is getting better and better!
The shading is great overall and you're working hard! Good luck, Kris-chan and happy birthday! This is good~ ^^ Keep it going!
curlyque64
Otakuite+ | Posted 06/06/11 | Reply
lol actually I don't know where my description went? Ahha I'll fix that.
Uhm yeah I've never been very good with the wrist/hand area. I actually think the sketch had the other fingers showing too, and it made more sense anatomically, but then when I line arted I some how missed the fingers when I was focusing on the hair ^^' I have to be more careful with that.
And the whole thigh thing... Haha this piece actually was a thank you for someone, who made very inspirational comments on the way today's society views girls... So that's why its a little exaggerated ^^' (Also my legs actually look somewhat like this xDD)
Thank you very much for your comments :) They always let me know what I should be working on next :D This really was an experimentation, and now I know better for the face. I wasn't really sure how to draw in this kind of style very well yet:) Thank you for pointing these things out :D
edit/ oh I just noticed your comment on the eyes/expression hehe xD Really I was trying to draw the eyes smaller than usual, I didn't mean for her to look drunken/drowsy xD They're actually open all the way lol.
Last edited by curlyque64 at 2:15:34 PM CDT on June 6, 2011.
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/06/11 | Reply
I'm wondering why you erased your description from earlier lol, it's not like you said anything bad. It's good that you are aiming to experiment with different styles...but I guess if you aren't a fan of shoujo-style then my art is definitely not your cup of tea huh? xDD
I liked what you had going before, because honestly I found the facial proportions to be better. Here it seems like the nose is too low and curved on the face, but it's an experiment so it's all good.
I like what you tried with the eyes and of course your coloring..it's getting so much better!(I think you're better than me now for sure..) Although I've gotta say the big issue with your art that I'm having as of late is with the anatomy.
For instance, again, take a look at the head. It is quite large in comparison to the rest of her body. The details on the hair are great, and I like what you were trying to do with the hands, however her right hand(our left) seems to be lacking in definition and shape, and looks like it is flipped around. She seems to be a bit lacking in wrists, and the proportions of her thighs are a bit skewed, particularly of her right(our left) leg, which is too thick and curvy at the base of the thigh. But the fixing of anatomy comes with practice, so keep working at it!
Also I'm a bit confused with her expression...because I'm not sure what it's trying to convey. The way you have her eyes somewhat closed makes it seem like she's drowsy, but then I see blush on her face, which kind of gives it a somewhat drunken look as opposed to embarassment or being bashful. I love the details you put in the eyes though, and your work with clothing is getting better and better!
The shading is great overall and you're working hard! Good luck, Kris-chan and happy birthday! This is good~ ^^ Keep it going!