I think the bits you drew look ace! Did you use a blood splatter brush? That was the part I meant when I said it looked a little out of place. Just that large splodge on the left, all the rest looks great! :3
Sorry if I sounded like I was going on about it, I just sometimes try to give a little constructive criticism every now and then ^^;
Impressive art though. That blood splatter on the left seems a little out of place though, it looks as though it is dripping off glass or thin air, and as the window/wall has been smashed then there would be no glass... The glass at the top looks ace, you did a great job adding the blood splatters there.
I'm not really a fan of gore but you really made this look good.
thaoiiees
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
Hahaha Thanks :D I haven't really touched it in
a whileforever though.Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
@thaoiiees:
Your manga is pretty incredible by the way :D
thaoiiees
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
No it was good ^^ Yeah I did use brushes for the blood <: I appreciate constructive criticism :D
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/11 | Reply
@thaoiiees:
I think the bits you drew look ace! Did you use a blood splatter brush? That was the part I meant when I said it looked a little out of place. Just that large splodge on the left, all the rest looks great! :3
Sorry if I sounded like I was going on about it, I just sometimes try to give a little constructive criticism every now and then ^^;
thaoiiees
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
Thank you for the detailed comment :D I don't usually draw gore myself but thought I should give it a shot <: LOL
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/11 | Reply
Yikes that looks brutal!
Impressive art though. That blood splatter on the left seems a little out of place though, it looks as though it is dripping off glass or thin air, and as the window/wall has been smashed then there would be no glass... The glass at the top looks ace, you did a great job adding the blood splatters there.
I'm not really a fan of gore but you really made this look good.
:3