no i really don't mind at all, that's the reason why i came here the first place to read about other people's opinions about my art. although i am not at that professional level yet, so you are gonna see some mistakes here and there even my previous works are like that. anyway thanks for the comment chibi-chan really appreciate it.
They both look great ^^ I'm sure your sister loved them, right? It is always fun to see someone else draw your OCs. I admire your shading, you have a really good style there. When I try and shade clothes it ends up a total mess.
My only criticism would be I think that Sabrina's right arm is bending in a slightly awkward way, her elbow looks a little large to me. But other than that this is great! Their expressions are cute, and I think you drew the eyes perfectly ^^
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zip skyblue (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/14/12 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
no i really don't mind at all, that's the reason why i came here the first place to read about other people's opinions about my art. although i am not at that professional level yet, so you are gonna see some mistakes here and there even my previous works are like that. anyway thanks for the comment chibi-chan really appreciate it.
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/14/12 | Reply
They both look great ^^ I'm sure your sister loved them, right? It is always fun to see someone else draw your OCs. I admire your shading, you have a really good style there. When I try and shade clothes it ends up a total mess.
My only criticism would be I think that Sabrina's right arm is bending in a slightly awkward way, her elbow looks a little large to me. But other than that this is great! Their expressions are cute, and I think you drew the eyes perfectly ^^
I hope you don't mind me commenting ^^;
ryukenden
zip skyblue (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/12 | Reply
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yeah! i drew one before this and it was pretty crappy so i decided to redraw it again.
ryukenden
zip skyblue (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/12 | Reply
@Alchemic Mushroom:
thank you! i am glad you enjoyed this.
Alchemic Mushroom
Angel (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/12 | Reply
great job on all the highlights! this is very good