no no no! it looks wrong because inuyasha's hair/bangs aren't that fluffy! oh well... good job...

I like it! I don't think anythings wrong with it! Keep it up! Later! ^_^ ~CD~

It looks fine to me. The characters look intermingled, so it just looks a little confusing at first.

i think it looks wrong because... maybe you coloured a little too lightly? try putting more pressure on the pencil crayons, it looks way better that way ;)