I agree with Wing Moon why not try coloring it? The wings are great. I say the sleves are a bit to big. But it adds a beautiful touch though soo it looks good!!!!

I like it! It's really cool! ^_^ Keep up the great work! ^_^

how can you say we won't like it?!?! this surely is better than my original girl drawings that's for sure!

i think it qite good nice and simple but as a good impact like silend dream said you should realy get some plan paper me voting sweet~chan

Its just okay, but dont use lined paper if your serious about drawing. Try to add more details. But its simple but not bad.