Wow! Thank you so much for the epic comment, and amazing feedback. I could reposition the characters In Photoshop and make them more proportional. Thank you for the idea and the suggestion! :D
I will be making another drawing for your challenge soon. I'm so glad you like it and thank you for making an epic challenge.
Oh I like your avatar/icon too!
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/16/15 | Reply
Sorry for the late comment on this! I've be on and offline this week. ^^'
Thank you very much for entering and for the dedication! I really appreciate it! :D
You can also enter another drawing into my challenge! I just forgot to mention how many times one can enter, sorry about that!
As for your drawing, it looks wonderful! I really like the concept of it and how you incorporated a personal story behind it.
I like the contrast of the purple and red and how it kind of blends in toward the middle where the hair is connected.
Your drawing definitely looks like a reflection of each other which is pretty cool. Plus it's neat how half it looks shouji and the other half shonen. I think it makes it look really neat!
I really adore the details on the sailor senshi outfit too!
For the characters though, I feel like Judai's face seems a little bigger then your character's and his body seems kind of small.
I would say that you could zoom him out a little and use your character's head to proportion his, so they would look like the are the same size. Same for the body too.
Other then that this looks really nice!
Good luck in the challenge! :D
Thanks for the feedback Keba-san. Your advice is very helpful. I really appreciate it. *hugs*
To be honest I wasn't too happy with Judai came out either. His face turned out to be a bit too long for my taste. Yep this one could definitely use a re-draw and when I have the time, I will take your suggestions and apply them and re-draw them to their full potential. Thank you for the suggestions and help. Its much appreciated and shall be applied to future drawings.
As far as the drawing for you goes, I have the lineart done. I just need to color it. I think you're really going to like it. *hugs*
I read your comment, and I saw that you were looking for feedback. I have a bit for you.
First of all, of the two of you, your anime persona came out better. You've really got that shoujo look going with the eyelashes and all. That makes a lot of sense, being that you dressed yourself in the style of Sailor Moon.
Judai didn't come out nearly as well. While you drew the eye really well, it looks a bit too big for the face. It should be a bit smaller and set back further-- not so close to his nose.
I realize how it is when you can't get everything you want on the paper and have to squeeze it in a little, even though it looks unnatural. If you don't do this already, I highly advise you to lightly pencil in where you want your characters to go, and then add the details.
I like your choice of color. The pink and purple background blends well with your blue and red outfits. You're also good at making the hair look like, well, hair. Sure, you have room to improve (as we all do), but you've come a long way, too.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/18/15 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
You're welcome Judai!
I look forward to seeing another entering from you!:D
and thank you! XD
Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/16/15 | Reply
@toyotami kun:
Wow! Thank you so much for the epic comment, and amazing feedback. I could reposition the characters In Photoshop and make them more proportional. Thank you for the idea and the suggestion! :D
I will be making another drawing for your challenge soon. I'm so glad you like it and thank you for making an epic challenge.
Oh I like your avatar/icon too!
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/16/15 | Reply
Sorry for the late comment on this! I've be on and offline this week. ^^'
Thank you very much for entering and for the dedication! I really appreciate it! :D
You can also enter another drawing into my challenge! I just forgot to mention how many times one can enter, sorry about that!
As for your drawing, it looks wonderful! I really like the concept of it and how you incorporated a personal story behind it.
I like the contrast of the purple and red and how it kind of blends in toward the middle where the hair is connected.
Your drawing definitely looks like a reflection of each other which is pretty cool. Plus it's neat how half it looks shouji and the other half shonen. I think it makes it look really neat!
I really adore the details on the sailor senshi outfit too!
For the characters though, I feel like Judai's face seems a little bigger then your character's and his body seems kind of small.
I would say that you could zoom him out a little and use your character's head to proportion his, so they would look like the are the same size. Same for the body too.
Other then that this looks really nice!
Good luck in the challenge! :D
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/12/15 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
I'm glad I could be of help. ^^
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/12/15 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
Thanks for the feedback Keba-san. Your advice is very helpful. I really appreciate it. *hugs*
To be honest I wasn't too happy with Judai came out either. His face turned out to be a bit too long for my taste. Yep this one could definitely use a re-draw and when I have the time, I will take your suggestions and apply them and re-draw them to their full potential. Thank you for the suggestions and help. Its much appreciated and shall be applied to future drawings.
As far as the drawing for you goes, I have the lineart done. I just need to color it. I think you're really going to like it. *hugs*
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/12/15 | Reply
I read your comment, and I saw that you were looking for feedback. I have a bit for you.
First of all, of the two of you, your anime persona came out better. You've really got that shoujo look going with the eyelashes and all. That makes a lot of sense, being that you dressed yourself in the style of Sailor Moon.
Judai didn't come out nearly as well. While you drew the eye really well, it looks a bit too big for the face. It should be a bit smaller and set back further-- not so close to his nose.
I realize how it is when you can't get everything you want on the paper and have to squeeze it in a little, even though it looks unnatural. If you don't do this already, I highly advise you to lightly pencil in where you want your characters to go, and then add the details.
I like your choice of color. The pink and purple background blends well with your blue and red outfits. You're also good at making the hair look like, well, hair. Sure, you have room to improve (as we all do), but you've come a long way, too.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!