Own, I'm glad you liked! The atmosphere is like that, because Cam lives forever because he is a demon, but Myko has a number of days, he always wants every minute he spends with her to last forever.
I would have said something back to you much much sooner, but I just now noticed that there were two comments on this instead of just my one! Haha, you didn't reply sooo...
I don't think many people did notice, but if they did they didn't want to say anything. I know if someone noticed something on my art that I would like someone to say something. Not nit picking or anything, just a little helpful advice. I wanted to let you know because it looked like you worked really hard on this piece and that your next pieces could be even more elaborate with a little bit of critique.
I still have a hard time drawing profiles and even kissing pictures - so I kinda... avoid them. Haha - god bad Rouletta. Anywho - the way I could see his eye being seen is if it was at a slightly different angle that or his bangs being brought up slightly like her hair is lifted in the wind. Even a little bit would have helped open up the eye area that you were trying to uncover.
Anywho! I still think this piece is lovely and I really like it. I also like your newest piece C. A. Cupid,. So keep up the awesome work!
I did have a problem with his eyes xD
The hair ended up covering most of it, but I did not wanted to cover it x__x
So I thought "Why not put slightly in the front?"
In the end, made his nose appear really small :< This only showed me that: Stick with your original plan xD
Thank you very much though <3 I'll always have that noted on my mind after today because I was "Oh...not many people will notice it...right?!"
Fool me >.<
It is a very pretty picture. I love the back ground and the overall composition of it. It is hard to do kissing characters.
The only thing that I see that actually made me download to look closer is that his eye. It either seems too close to the bridge of the nose or that his nose is too small? I think if it was placed where I believe it should be, you would barely see a hint of it behind his hair if not at all. Over all though as I said before. I love it.
LizziehKoi
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/07/15 | Reply
@OoAnBuOo:
Own, I'm glad you liked! The atmosphere is like that, because Cam lives forever because he is a demon, but Myko has a number of days, he always wants every minute he spends with her to last forever.
OoAnBuOo
Jabbawookie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/16/15 | Reply
They feel like they will never end this kiss... I´m kinda envious.
Anyways, I really love the kissing scene, so moving~
Last edited by OoAnBuOo at 1:36:48 PM CDT on September 16, 2015.
LizziehKoi
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/10/15 | Reply
@Rouletta:
(I am a fool...only noticed the reply thing now)
Thank you very much!
Rouletta
Otakuite | Posted 09/09/15 | Reply
@LizziehKoi:
I would have said something back to you much much sooner, but I just now noticed that there were two comments on this instead of just my one! Haha, you didn't reply sooo...
I don't think many people did notice, but if they did they didn't want to say anything. I know if someone noticed something on my art that I would like someone to say something. Not nit picking or anything, just a little helpful advice. I wanted to let you know because it looked like you worked really hard on this piece and that your next pieces could be even more elaborate with a little bit of critique.
I still have a hard time drawing profiles and even kissing pictures - so I kinda... avoid them. Haha - god bad Rouletta. Anywho - the way I could see his eye being seen is if it was at a slightly different angle that or his bangs being brought up slightly like her hair is lifted in the wind. Even a little bit would have helped open up the eye area that you were trying to uncover.
Anywho! I still think this piece is lovely and I really like it. I also like your newest piece C. A. Cupid,. So keep up the awesome work!
LizziehKoi
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/08/15 | Reply
I did have a problem with his eyes xD
The hair ended up covering most of it, but I did not wanted to cover it x__x
So I thought "Why not put slightly in the front?"
In the end, made his nose appear really small :< This only showed me that: Stick with your original plan xD
Thank you very much though <3 I'll always have that noted on my mind after today because I was "Oh...not many people will notice it...right?!"
Fool me >.<
Rouletta
Otakuite | Posted 08/31/15 | Reply
It is a very pretty picture. I love the back ground and the overall composition of it. It is hard to do kissing characters.
The only thing that I see that actually made me download to look closer is that his eye. It either seems too close to the bridge of the nose or that his nose is too small? I think if it was placed where I believe it should be, you would barely see a hint of it behind his hair if not at all. Over all though as I said before. I love it.
Keep up the great work!