on this the neck is a bit too long and the shoulders are a bit too wide maybe try making them slant down a lil ya know what i mean? also depending on what u picture the person looking like.....if you want the face to be long keep it the way it is if you want it to be more roundish make the cheek bone thingys a lil lower.....oh and the arms shouldnt be away from the body if they are relaxed....other than that you got everything down pat......hope i helped and i hope i didnt sound mean or n e thing....well see ya ^_^