Yeah you're right, his arm is short lol. I will keep that in mind for next time. I have trouble with proportions sometimes. I will better map out my pose and proportions next time. Thanks for the help.
The real major thing that looks off to me is his left arm. It's pretty short. The crook of his elbow should be about as high as his head, whereas, in this drawing, it's closer to his ear. My guess is that you just ran out of room on your paper. It happens to us all, really. If you intend to draw another character in a similar pose, I suggest drawing the character's head and body lower on the page.
I have to give you credit. It's hard to draw dynamic poses, and you did well. Keep it up!
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Thank you, I always love reading your comments. I'm open to constructive criticism. I know there is still some things I can draw better and if I know what they are, they will help me improve. :)
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/02/21 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
You are very welcome. d(^^)b
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☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/02/21 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
Yeah you're right, his arm is short lol. I will keep that in mind for next time. I have trouble with proportions sometimes. I will better map out my pose and proportions next time. Thanks for the help.
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/01/21 | Reply
@Rainbow Dragon:
I'm glad to help you out.
The real major thing that looks off to me is his left arm. It's pretty short. The crook of his elbow should be about as high as his head, whereas, in this drawing, it's closer to his ear. My guess is that you just ran out of room on your paper. It happens to us all, really. If you intend to draw another character in a similar pose, I suggest drawing the character's head and body lower on the page.
I have to give you credit. It's hard to draw dynamic poses, and you did well. Keep it up!
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Rainbow Dragon
☠Eastsider✰Pirate☠ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/01/21 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
Thank you, I always love reading your comments. I'm open to constructive criticism. I know there is still some things I can draw better and if I know what they are, they will help me improve. :)
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/28/21 | Reply
Nicely done! The eyes look especially great.
Would you like some constructive feedback? If not, that's fine too. The most important thing is that you enjoy your craft.
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