This is awesome! I've drawn two characters of my own but I'm afraid to submit anything because of other peoples opinions. I'll try to submit one especially for you to see!

So many comments, lol. I know how you fell when no people comment on my pics so anyway, back to the pic. You should've used a darken red to shade instead of black, that makes it look messy. She doesn't appear to have an elbow on her left arm. What's with the cuts and bruises?? That sort of ruins it... Her eye is good, but the inside of her ear is a litle on the super weird side.Her hair at the back of the neck, that little tuft of thing, should've connected to the main part instead of making the back of hair hair connect to the neck the way it did... I don't know if that part made sense to you but oh well. Also, you should have more bangs. Manga characters are full of bangs (incase you don't know what they are, they are the big bis at the front that look cool, that Bang! at ya,) anyway, the one bang you managed to do looks as if it died half way. it's lost all it's steam. I don't quite get what those red things in her hair are... blisters?! (lol). Those things on the side of her head don't really have a way to stay on, gravity IS still included in animes ya know. Anyway, I hope you read this because this hurt my eyes squinting to try and find the last bit wrong with this pic (ha! I'm just joking) but I DO have saw fingers. To finish up, good work but this should be in ORIGINAL ANIME!