Hmm, the thing that I noticed the most is the length of the arms. Her bent arm is a little too short and it should bend a little further down. If you were to imagine her standing up, her hand should reach about midlength of her upperleg area. Hands and feet are as you said, and I agree with EAMR on this one! I really like the face though, it gives a most defintie look of tragic serenity, or at least to me!
What are you talking about?o_OThe perspection and proportions are fine...actually good!!!
Your art style is very unique,I love it!!!
Yes,hands and feet are hard to draw...I spend lots of time staring at my hand when I draw,so that's how I learn^^;
Actually the perspective is pretty darn good! I read her foot being in the foreground. Hands and feet are really hard. With the feet though, it's easy to cover those up which you succeeded here but learning to draw hands/feet, the best thing to do is practice. There's really no set way to do it. You aren't going to wake up one morning and find you can draw them. Practice drawing your own hands/feet, or your friends. If you don't want to do that then get images offline and draw those. Eventually, you'll start to understand how the fingers move and can make them look good!
No advice really, since I'm not much of a drawer [more of a writer]. But I think it's absolutely awesome. How you drew her in that position. Her sitting on the floor rather than the couch.
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