me 2! *sigh* i hate finals!!! and i'll read it when u send it! lol

yep, isn't he just the best? ^-^ i'll get you the next chapter tomorrow...i'm cramming for finals right now >.< i just came by so you wouldn't think i forgot you!

that was great!!! i'm so glad that he still has me in it even though i'm not able to comment on it! *sigh* thank you so much for doing this for me!

Demon Dragon Akayo:lets go then Shadow:alright fine! Shadow quits joking around and powers up to his real power!] demon Dragon Akayo:hump your not that impressing? Shadow:We will see about that! Shadow charges and quickly moves to the right Akayo follows and swings with his right fist! Shadow catches his fist and swings with his fist and akayo catches so they are in a fist lock! Akayo smiling:not bad Shadow:well you are! Shadow kicks Akayo in his ribssending him back Akayo:Whoa that was fast! Shadow:dont worry im just going to get faster! Akayo:fine with me! Akayo moves and all that is left behind is his shadow! Shadow looking around:where is he........there Shadow blocks Akayos kick b ut akayo grabs himShadow was ready for this and parrys his grab by doing a backwardflip kick to Akayos face Akayo flys back into the building boom!!!!!!!!! people scream u Akayo:ouch uh oh he flys and grabs the building Shadow:so ive found a weak spot have i? Shadow shoots a t another building But rin comes and deflects it! Rin angry:im tired of this nonsense!Kaidro tokio, and tensin guard the people here tatliya jalie kaitlyn yuriko yuri and mom put up a barrier around yourselves and star im gonna KILL YOU! Rin powers up using his new power that he got from veklor! Demon Dragon Rin:You dare to put my son in danger,you attack my mother,and even threaten to kill them im gonna turn you into road kill! Star:ive been waiting to fight fine but after we kill you too im gonna kill them! Kagiri:go Akayo get him! Akayo:allright bro you ready! Rin:lets go there not that fast Akayo im faster then shadow! Star:thats great because so am i! Star powers up and disappears she goes to attack Akayo Rin:oh no you dont he tackels star Shadow:STAR!! Akayo:your fight is with me!!!!! Akayo punches shadow in the side of his face! Shadow flys back and hits a truck exploding it! Shadow angry:you insolent fool dare hit me ha ha ha ha ha this gonna be fun! Star kicks rin off her and standes beside shadow! Rin flips and lands beside Akayo Shadow:last time this power ran out so its only a matter of time! Akayo smirking:thats what you think. Shadow pulls out a sword and so does star! Akayo:so what ive got a weapon too he summons infamous blade! Rin:i dont have my weapon anymore akayo! Akayo:thats why when you all gave me your weapons so i could come back i kept them he summons rins staff an tosses it to him Rin:now your dead! Shadow:runs toward akayo Ayame:remeber what i taught you! Akayo:you got it! Shadow swings his blade akayo counter with the same swing! Rin charges at star and swings his staff at her face Star parrys with her sword Over to wear Lord Disaga is Lord Disaga:yes im finaally done increasing my power! He teleports to wear everyone is fighting! Lord Disaga:hello everyone! Kaidro:you again grrrrrrrr Tokio:oh this is just great! Tensin:we cant let him hurt the baby! Lord Disaga:im not interested in you all i want Akayo he is my new apprentince! Akayo getting angry:yeah right! Rin:you dare to show your face back here! Lord Disaga:star and shadow finish them off! Lord Disaga approaches the baby! The ki warriors charge Lord disaga:weaklings he tries to blow them away they all dodge Jalie:it wont be Yuriko:that easy! The ki warriors attack Lord Disaga they knock him to the ground! Shadow:my lord Akayo charges and swings his sword at shadows face Star:shadow get down! Shadow grabs sword with both hands and blocks Rin:you should be woried about yourself Rin hits Star in her stomach with his staff! putting her to her knees! Shadow:grrrrrrrrr Akayo:whats wrong you thought it would be easy! Lord Disaga laughing:i had to test my neewfound power none of those attacks you just did hurted me he blast all them at once sending them to the ground!Now for the kid! Rakesa eyes turn white:you will not harm y grandson! She puts a angelic barrier over her,yuri and the baby! Lord disaga:so you still can fight!Im gonna break this barrier! Lord disaga:lol Shadow:im tired of this star you ready! Star:yep They both attack Lord Disaga surprising him Lord Disaga:what are you doing?aahhhhhhhhhhhh Shadow:come to me thy spirits Akayo shocked:what the? Rin shocked :no way the betrade there own master! Shadow star and lord disaga fuse into one being! strange voice:i am now the ultimate being! call me God shadow Akayo:whoa his power is unreal.Listen to me all of you get out of here! God Shadow:there will be no escape! he shoots all of them down to the ground and breaks Rakesa shield and appears infront of the baby! Yuri:LET GO OF MY SON!!!! Rin:grrrrrrrrr no it wont happen rin teleports infront of god shadow and punches him out of the building! God shadow:i didnt feel a thing! Akayo behind god shadow:well maybe you will feel this!!!!!!! impales his word threw his back! God shadow takes sword out and shatters it! and grabs akayoby his throat! and his hand starts glowing! Rin:no no noo!!!!!!!!!!!! God shadow puts his hand right threw akayos chest Akayo:ahhhhhhhhhhhh coughs up blood God shadow lets him drop to the ground the other ki warriors catch him! Rin eyes go completely red:so you did it again! other ki warriors are furios all of there eyes go red! God shadow:thats it all of you come at me and die!!!!!!!!!!

lol thats ok... and thank you so much fo getting his story to me! lol what's his new one about?

ok! i'll get his story to you! ^_^ he's started a new one already, too! oh...yea...people can read these, can't they? i didn't even think about that!

i would love for u to send me akayo's story...i left off at chapter 32 lol and ur right...this is kinda fun...u know...except for the whole every one can read these...notes are at least semi privat! lol ttfn

^_^ this is fun, it's kind of like being in a chat box, mixed with pms, mixed with...uhhh...passing notes in class! ^_^ i know, that character minimum can get so annoying sometimes! it's hard to fill space with nothing... oh! a while ago, you said you wanted to read akayo's story, right? if you want, i could get it for you!

ur welcome...and thank you! lol ...........................(i needed more to make the 50) lol

oh! thank you for commenting on my art! ^_^ and i see you posted some new art too! i'll go see them!

ya...i did c some of these! lol thank you! and i can c them if i look for them...what catagory did u put them in?!? i'll go and look...then i'll comment! lol thank you so much! lol ttfn jamie

ok! i'll go ge those comments...*runs off* here we go! Duck Pony Chimera Member Posted 04/26/05 at 08:24 PM Cool pic. ^_^ nausicaa0 Senior Artist Posted 04/26/05 at 03:53 PM The first picture is really pretty, what series is that from? As on why the others don't show...maybe you could check if the URLs are correct, is there anything missing in the codes (like the "" around the address), or maybe the site where the pic's from just doesn't allow direct linking. Hope this helps! ^_^ CuteKilala Senior Artist Posted 04/26/05 at 12:34 PM I can see one picture but your whole site is moving.O_O mishotarup Member Posted 04/26/05 at 12:12 PM I can only see one picture!*sob* FairyHr Member Posted 04/26/05 at 11:28 AM ok...so u can all c one of them...but the other ones are just little blocks...*sigh* one is better then none! lol Mimi Member Posted 04/26/05 at 10:32 AM Only got to see 4 of them. They were cool though! CuteKilala Senior Artist Posted 04/26/05 at 10:28 AM I can't see the pictures, all I see are the URLs. Nobunaga Kage Member Posted 04/26/05 at 10:13 AM 1st picture: Kool 2nd: wouldn't show 3rd: wouldn't show 4th: sweet 5th: wouldn't show 6th: wouldn't show 7th: Spike...LoL he looks pissed...oh wait, that is normal... 8th: Page not found 9th: Beautiful 10th:wouldn't show Number 5 Senior Artist Posted 04/26/05 at 09:41 AM uhh...there's only the URL of the pic there. do you want the code for the pic to show? FairyHr Member Posted 04/26/05 at 09:15 AM wait...so u can c them...but i can't?!? i'm confused... @.@ all i c are the URL's *sigh* i gess i'll never get it right Steptoussai Senior Artist Posted 04/26/05 at 09:14 AM Neat pics! ~Hugs and Love Always~ i think you saw some of these, because you commented too! ^^ can you still see people's fanart? akayo said he was going to try and post some...^_^ an di've been puttign up some too! that's what i'm doing now, actually! and thank you so much(again) for letting me be in your story! it's so nice of you!

lol then i'll think of somethin that i think u may like for your charecter! lol thank you so much for showing me my comments!!! it makes me so happy! and i'm glad to know that people who aren't over here talking to me right now still care about me! lol there is one more post that i didn't get to c my comments from...the one right b4 the one saying i wouldn't be on...if it wouldn't be ne trouble... that rool about not being able to make more then one comment in a row is so stupid!!! i hate it...but when i forget...i just coppy, and then deleat the comment and past it...then add to it! ^__^ it works out in the end! lol ttfn jamie

soory about the wait...i forgot about that "no consecutive posts" rule... well, here we go, i hope these are the right ones! ^_^ these are from when you siad you wouldn't be able to post anymore... Gemini Senior Artist Posted 04/28/05 at 10:58 PM aww well i guess ill see ya when you get back! ^_^ mishotarup Member Posted 04/28/05 at 07:13 PM I'll be waiting for your comeback!!^_^ CuteKilala Senior Artist Posted 04/28/05 at 04:34 PM Ok, I'll be waiting.^_^ and these are from chapter 13... Number 5 Senior Artist Posted Yesterday at 11:49 AM story... Steptoussai Senior Artist Posted 05/03/05 at 07:58 PM That was cool! ~Hugs and Love Always~ mishotarup Member Posted 05/03/05 at 06:42 PM I didn't expect to see Corrie and Shinka together, but they make a cute couple!^^ Keep up the good work!! CuteKilala Senior Artist Posted 05/03/05 at 06:32 PM I can't see the picture... That chapter was great!^_^ there you go! (i hope those were the right ones! if not, i'll try again ^_^) my character...hmmm...she can be whatever you want! ^_^ i'm not really good at describing myself...

AKAYO _________ i'm here now! i hope u get this... and i've just been counting down the days till i'm home again...it should be very soon...and my fathers trial is comeing up soon as well!!! i have a bunch of pictures that i realy want to get up soon...i'm even working on a BG!!! can't wait to hear from you again soon! lol but enough about me...how have you been the past few days? i heard u got ur hand smashed in...what happened?!? DREAM WINGS ___________ great! i can't wait to put you in!!! what do you want ur name to be...and tell me about ur character! i'll go from there! ^_____^ and thank you so much for going to get my comments and put them up for me! i realy appreat it!

i'll go get your comments! ^_^ and i would be honored to be in your story! ^_^ that would make me really happy! thank you for the kind offer! be right back with some of your post comment thingys! *runs off*

i'm doing fine...i just remembered that thursday will be my one year anaversery that i've been in care...*tear* o well... hey...in ur next comment could you put in every story that u've written scence i''ve been gone? i miss reading them but i miss talking to you more...so keep commenting!!! ^_______^ love ya

i'm so glad to be reading your comment!!! i was getting woried! it's been so long scence i last talked to you...i thought that u forgot about me :( and i'm glad that u r here now!!! i saw u were loged on!!! yay!!! me is so happy!!!

actuaily for some reasion...akayo hasn't been talking to me much :( and as far as the posting thing goes...i already have a friend who has posted 2 things for me as it is...and she is at my school and dose it from her house...i do beleave that u wouldn't do ne thing to my site...and i realy am glad that u care enough to do this for me and it is so great that you've done that 4 other ppl!!! however...i've already got someone to do it for me...right now it's just a matter of comeing up with how my story will go...without the imput of the people who are in it...i realy am running out of ideas...o...but if you would like to put my comments up here so that i can read them i would so love that!!! i don't know what my past 3 posts comments were...i never had a chance to check them...and now i can't get to them at all...as you know... thank you so much!!! you have truely been a blessing to me and i'm just realising it now...for that i'm sorry! o...WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE IN MY STORY!?!?!?!? i would love to add you! i hope to hear from you soon! jamie

oh! i was thinking the other day...if you would like, i could post for you! if you would like, that is...i would even put your comments on here, so you could read them... if you would type what you would like posted here, i could log on as you (i promise not to do anything! i've done this sort of thing for people here before) and post it for you! then it would kindof be like you were still here... if you would like, i would be happy to do that for you! ^_^ and i'm sure that akayo would vouch for my credibility

i'm trying my best to get over it...looking up realy stupid site and just finding other stuff t do instead...o...i found this realy stupid one...gothornot.com it's funny because there are pictures and u get to rait them on their apperience and weather their got or not...lol but ne way...right now there is nothing much that u could do for me except for comment every once and a wile so i can say hi!!! ttfn

i did...i hope your coping with the loss of your site ok....if there's anthing i could do for you, just ask! i would be glad to help ^_^

the school blocked the site because of the amount of times that i visited it...and MR Davis (the guy incharge so to speak) is debating weather or not to give it back because of the PM'ing...*sigh* o well...it will all work out...i gess...and if worse comes to worse...i will be able to talk to you all the time when i get back home!!! YAY!!! love u jamie

i hope that i can get back to my site soon 2...but for now this is the only way that i can even hear from my fellow otakens! lol and i still can't get to my site T.T *sigh* o well...it will all work out... i'll try agen... here goes nothing... ... ... GREAT NEWS!!! i just saw mr davis in the hall and he said that he was gona bring it back!!! i'm so happy!!! so i should be back up by the end of the week!!! this makes me so happy!!! big hugs 4 every one! ("^.^/") "bud da bup bup ba...i'm loveing it" lol

hey, here you are! ^_^ i hope you can get back to your site soon!

i'm ok...and i saw your comment on the other one!!! thank you so much!

ok...i realy hope that u find this...i can't get to my site because of a block...and i can't get to ne1 elt's site ither...so i won't be commenting on ur stuff for a while...i just talked to the persion who dose the blocking...and i gave him my plea...but i don't know how long it will take till i can actuaily get to it...THIS IS FOR EVERY ONE ELTS 2!!! i have no way of posting my story or ne thing elts...i'm so sad right now that i think i may cry!!! i truely hope that all of you don't get upset at me because i can't post ne more...i don't know if i can get up my art...i will try...but everything elts is out of the question for god knows how long...AND I WAS JUST STARTING TO UNDERSTAND IT 2!!! i'm so sad now...that i have actuaily begun to cry!...the only way that i can talk to you is threw comments on art!!! so when you all find this comment pass the word on...and i pray that this dosn't happen to you!!! and for those of you who are wondering...i can't get on to this site from my house because my foster parents are totaly agenst it...and they don't even let me go on the computer at all because i may do something bad...as they say...but regardless of all of this...i will still try and figure a way out of it!!! i love you all and i hope that you understand this! T.T i've never been so sad in my life... ...i feal like running and hideing and i just want to be back!!! i realy hope that u all get this in time!!! for i feal i may go back to my old habbits if something is not done soon... *tears flowing quite strong now* people are actuaily starting to stare at me because i'm crying and typing so fast...but i don't care I JUST WANT MYO BACK!!!