try to put the mouth a little more at the right and i'd say the body is a little disbalanced try to trace a line in the middle then drawing everything on it proportionnaly and the eyes are nice... except that you should put a little more lashes on them oh and try to make the arms cleaner, without too much muscle seeing and a little more big the hairs are nice... but she don't have ears ^_^' the clothes are kewl oh yeah... try to put ummm... how's that called... a dammit i'll just continue in french bon, met les sourcis un pue plus clean, genre plus mince pi sans toucher au yeux pentoute okay, except that it's good NO i don't try to bring you down if you follow those advices i believe it'll be really nice I think that was a good comment not like the one from zero

he is partly right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she looks alittle manly don't you think other then that pritty good come comment and rate some of my work