lol ur not being a nit pik^^actually it's quite helpful^^ it was a quick doodleXD ill fix it when i get the chance^^but thanx agian! and im not offendedXD

i'm feel like such a nit-pick now but meh. the overall character is fine and quite adorable really. her expression was done well. but here are the things that could be improved upon (a mon avis) her right eye should be lowered a bit, it's a little too high compared to the left one. the top aoi's head is rather flat. unless angel is up (greater than what yours is), the eyes are *normally* at least halfway between the crown and the chin. and her ear could be a bit further back in her head. one thing that would really help out the aesthetic appearance of your drawings is having unlined paper. if you need the lines for spacing, draw them in lightly with pencil and erase. once again, sorry to be such a nit-pick. i hope you weren't offended or anything.