Saki: Woooow... (nothing more) Hotaryu:I really wish saki could draw like you.

To my mind, it looks finished. Nothing else to be said.

Thats really good! Your drawing style is impressive, and the emiotion is portrayed perfectly!

good use of the paper - the highlights show up well on it

I love how you portrayed the emotion here~ Very cool. I also like the sketchiness to this... it may be unfinished, but it looks great as is ^_^

(To firetiger ~> "emphasized" ^_~ ) But I agree - this is beautiful. The emotions are bare and raw, and I think it is simply wonderful.