well said well said.But see we are not criticizing you.We are just helping you.Maby when my pic.of fan art get's sent in I will show you what he means.*Smile*Be happy to have people like this!!!!
Hey! I count three "no" votes at the moment and not a single comment! I think this is good; plus, when someone asks for reasons and critique, you should at least oblige to the request. Here, hopefully they voted no for a reason other than hating or burning you...that's low. Lemme give a shot at what you need to do:
-perhaps the girl's face is a bit uneven and odd. Although I understand the concept of the cat face, others may find this one too extreme
-the folds could be less stiff and move evenly distributed according to motion, but then not all artists vote "no" for that reason
-sasuke's hand looks a bit odd. Work on palm and finger length and try to get the propotion just right. Look at your hand, a friend's hand, anyone's hand just to see the differences
Aside from that, I think you did beautifully. I especially like how you did Sasuke's expression, facial features, and hair. I also like your shading, it's done relatively softly and breaks away from traditional anime/manga-style coloring.
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Later then! ^^
Serenia
Otakuite | Posted 06/27/05 | Reply
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Otaku Legend | Posted 05/29/05 | Reply