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    Luff

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/03/05 | Reply

    Err...it's ok, but I agree with Lindus, the hair needs sorting out. The outline is not very good. Well there isn't any...hmm. Well it's good anyway. Everything else is great though. ^-^

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    Lindus

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/03/05 | Reply

    very nice. the expression and eyes are particularly pretty. Even the ear is good! constructive crit (should you choose to take it): Her hair need lineart. It looks kind of awkward when the rest of her body is outlined when her hair is not. I think it'd look good that way. Her boobs also seem to sag a little. Maybe put them up a little higher? But very nice work overall. =3