Err...it's ok, but I agree with Lindus, the hair needs sorting out. The outline is not very good. Well there isn't any...hmm. Well it's good anyway. Everything else is great though. ^-^
very nice. the expression and eyes are particularly pretty. Even the ear is good!
constructive crit (should you choose to take it): Her hair need lineart. It looks kind of awkward when the rest of her body is outlined when her hair is not. I think it'd look good that way. Her boobs also seem to sag a little. Maybe put them up a little higher?
But very nice work overall. =3
Luff
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/03/05 | Reply
Lindus
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/03/05 | Reply