aaaaa... very very good. such soft texture. make the eyes not so big so that it does not throw off the solfness. very good for a story

Yes, I think this is very good, too. I agree with chikki that you should keep working on it! Maybe you'll like it more. That's cool that this is a pic from your story. I always think it's so hard to draw from a story... It's easier the other way around! ^_~ Well, anyway, great job!! Keep it up!

I like the pic ^^ Well drawn and very original idea! i would SO love to have clotes like that. Very proportional and cool idea. I like it!

i think she looks great! (its a girl right?) well, it looks natural, and the lines are soft, whitch is nice.Also, the body is in right proportions. You should like this drawing! Continue to work on it! Give it more detail, foldings in clothing, shadow...background, theres so much more you can do! Good luck!