I think the legs and hands are way too small. Ichigo isn't supposed too be too cute. She is twelve and mostly very serious. I think it needs too be a little more serious. The coloring needs too be a bit more bold. But the shading is pretty good.
omg so kawaii!! -^_^-.. but one suggestion that i too have problems with.. try making bolder colors... when the colors r bold they look less sketchy... not that ur's is sketchy or nething!! but overall i'd give it a 10/10 ^_^
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The crazy bubbly shadow