its cool, you should colour it, ur art is really cool

I think the lay out of the picture is quite a nice idea. The only thing I don't like about it os the guys hair.(No harm, right?) (- - I like the middle panel and then, it seperates to the two corners, showing the characters' unique personality. You get me, right? (-.o ?

its very good. You should absolutely color it! -Sachiko ^^

Very cool! I love the profile on the guy awsome job! Though he looks like he's wearing a close fitting cap. Maybe if you made the rest of his hair spikey?