Ok. Good picture. But you should try to get rit o' the eraser marks, or try to press leighter until everything but the colouring/shading is done, then you go over the picture harder. And when you shade, you should'nt smuge it too much, otherwise it will just look like a big smuge mark on your page and it wont look like it was on purpose. Also it's harder to keep in the lines if you smuge too much. Other than that, that's a great picture. Good Job!