ElvesAteMyRamen

Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/03/05 | Reply

The hair actually doesn't bother me. I do think some of the proportions in the body are a little off. Something that should help you out is when you're doing a drawing, stand it up and then step away from it and look at it from a distance. Or put it on the ground and look down at it. By looking at it from a distance it will help you see clearer what needs to be fixed. Good job with it though^_^
TravelingDisciple

Otaku Legend | Posted 07/02/05 | Reply

i like it^^. the hair is ok but it could be better. you draw so neat that i don't even see any erase marks. sometimes when i draw i have to digitally erase my marks in pencil.^^; God blesss^_~
Miyoko-chan

Otaku Legend | Posted 07/01/05 | Reply

I agree! The gun looks really good! I can't draw weapons worth crap, so the fact that you can really impresses me! Good Job!
thelostsindar

The Wandering Elf (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/01/05 | Reply

Great job! I think the hair looks good ^_^ You did really well on the gun too.