It doesn't really matter to me. I think it is good. the shading is what gives a drawing it's depth and makes it appear more 3D. though one thing that I will give you advice on is his hair. If you want him to look more realistic, then don't put that white line on there like that. Make it blend more. Or at least try. And i suppose that part of his hair is actually white, ne? still juat act as if it were part of his hait and stuff... if you know what I mean and not so... seperate from the black in his hair. make it shimmer more. With shines... like real hair. You know what I mean? I'm not trying to critisize it, just a tip. If you really want to get something to look real them borrow a book called Anatomy for the Artist from the library. It may help in proportions and stuff. You may like it. It's a big book with a yellow cover. Okay. ttyl. Ja ne.
~Katie~
Well, That's your opinion, I've asked someone about that, and they told me that they looked like that before (sort of). Just because the arms look a bit big doesn't matter, some people can look like that. And the nose, well....the nose was really hard anyways... ._.' ....even though it might just suck, but oh well. I really tried on that one. and I like it, and that's all that matter I suppose, but thank you for your comment. ^-^ Because, this is the FIRST time you've commented on my drawings. o.o... heh heh...
Um...
the shading is done well, I'll give you that.
But if we're talking constructive criticism...
I don't mean this in a mean way but the chest is a bit smaller than the arms, so a weight transfer is in order, and the nose bothers me a little. Good job for a first try though ^o^ keep practicing!
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