It's okay. Try doing something different with his lower half, it's a bit... deformed. Also, look at proportions, his head... yeah. Also, not really any shading. Nice pic overall, though.
It may sounds weird but my fave part is the letters you put on the front of his shirt. I really like the typography of it!! It really fits the entirity of the image!!
Dude, to save time on all 8 pics, I'll just put it in this one. They all are incredible. As far as improvement (since you want tips and advice), I'd say try to improve with colors. Everything's done with a number 2 pencil. That's about it, other than that, they all rock. Stay (sic).
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