His jaw isn't difined enough..if you compared it to his character design... The inking's well done! I look forward to see it in color!!

Looks really nice. His head seems a little big, but other than that I think this is great! Awesome lineart ^^

Ya I Love IT ^.~ UH The Shrimp Looks Mad. AHHHH Ed I TAKE IT BACK runs for life... (puff puff) Note To Self Don't EVER CALL ED A SHRIMP!!! GREAT WORK ^_^