Nice. I love the detail! ^ ^

Wow, very cool. Nice job on this one.. WOoTT!!! I just commented on everyone of you fanart submissions!! I TOLD you I'd get to your art!! lol aND it was some awesome stuffs, too, I might add.

I agree with everyone, I love the symbolism, and I like that it can mean different things to different people. awesome drawing!

it looks great!! Like a broken heart trying to be fixed, great job! well i can't wait for the finished look ^-^

Great art!! ^-^ No doubt! So this is how a broken heart looks like?? woah. I really hope I wont try that. But otherwise really good.

Cool! I agree, nice symbolism. You should color it! ^_^ ~k

Wow very good drawing. It is really deep. Nice symbolysim. Take care.

I know it's an outline but it really speaks to me because me and my brother are orfins and in differnt countents. i like it!!!

I guess this symbolises a broken heart and the struggle to mend it. You could try everything but you have to wait for it to mend on it's on. Great artwork. ^^

I quite like it! The ideas very original (I know you said it was your friend's request but I still thought it was worth mentioning!) I'm sure it'll look even better when you finish it!

I like it. It reminds me of when we had to do drug posters for Red Ribbon Week (No Drugs and stuff).

datz realli nice!!!!! 4 an outline dat looks great^^

wow! this is cool! for just an outline it looks awesome! can't wait to see the outcome!!!