*Listen* do you hear that? the picture is begging to be colored. or at least shaded. i don't color my pictures that much but i try to shade them. and i ink them too. it'd look soo much better if you did that. its good but its hard to tell where his face is at. the details on the sword are good. i like it.

thats not saiyuki!!!lol..its cloud..wat r u tryin to pull?