For a first attempt this is an excellent piece of work. I also like how you shaded the entire picture instead of leaving it black and white alone.

dude Sazuka's (hope i spelled that right....)(and everyone elses too!) eyes rock! man thats awesome!i really like that eye lol :)

critiques? hmm well, over all it's a nice pic, so for some help( i'll try not 2 seem mean) the lines that seperate the characters gene,ed and what not are exactly the same as faye's hair. u should make her hair a bit less dark, perhaps a different pencil, even a little shade difference goes a long way, that and try to make ure hair lines a bit more definite, their a bit shaky, but still only to help... like the pic tho

this is very good the eyes are incredible and the shading is great. if anything at all, id say the mouths might need a bit of improvement. this is a great peice

never seen this anime before, but the picture is really good ^^ this is awesome for a pencil sketch...good job ^^

woooow .. very nice pic.. ilove the shading ..and the eyes .. keep up ^__^

It looks fantastic. The shading is really good. Good Job!!