*snicker* Boy, you can you didn't like that fanfic! I like the drawings in the panels but I agree that it's a little confusing in some parts. Just making the panels a little different in shape and size should help that out^_^
Layout's rather confusing. next time, try to work speach bubbles into the layout, along with looking at some comic layouts to get an idea of how to do panels for a comic.
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