Wow nice pic!!! Really cute!! Kaki-kusu's advice is very good!! I think its such I ggreat idea to make your own manga staring yourself and I would love to see more!!
Nice job! You are really developing as a High Rated artist! But I'm gonna give you some advice for future reference (don't be offended, I would like to offer helpful opinions)
Help
*Try and give your hands more shape. I drew hands like that before. The hands are normally equal in circumference to the face when fully laid out.
*Faces are good, but they have a more defined shape. It is made of a circle, and a bottom chin which is pulled down from a centimeter into the circle on each side.
*Your foot is too small to support the body. Depending on a person's height gives the foot size. It's normally the length of the head - then toes.
*Lastly, add some folds to the cloths. It gives the figure a defined shape, so people understand. Without a definite shape, a character could be skinny one day, and totally off with body shape the next.
Hope this helps!
-Kaki
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