Interesting layout. I think the one in the bottom left needs a little rethink. Cause the people on the top left, the lines lead to the right. And my eye is hung upon the line that is leading to the right. So, what I mean, is that I either choose to look down or up, it doesn't flow smoothly through the picture. I don't think I'm making sense but anyway, Nice. (-_- ~wonder~

cool i like them all they all have brilliant detail ^^

WOW AWSOME i REALLY LOVE YOUR MANGA!! "Kennys" sholders look a little strange but over all, It looks really professional!! I think some shading would look really good!! Keep going with this!! Your characters look awsome!!