I think there should be more space to be cleared to read.(D_D Cause it seems everything is too close together to read anything which is distracts the eyes to looking at things that you don't want the reader to look at. A part from closness... maybe more planned pictures, cause I'm getting a rough bits of the characters. I haven't seen what they're wearing yet. So maybe a full view of them might be in plan. The main character especially. (-.- ~butsweet~

very well, drawn. i'll read some more. since i don't think you're on so i don't have much else to do.

you've definately got the style down! I like how you've divided up the frames ^_^

nice, no idea what it about but nice ^_^. lies the use of pen. *thumbs up*