This is pretty darn good for your first. ^^ I have to say, you're a lot more daring that I was when I started. Contructive criticism? ... Yeah, work on the lines, and that hand. I was going to say something about the thickness of the arms, but after a second look, I think they're all right for this pic. Well, see ya around!

Tis good, You need to work on hair and coloring and some lines and little stuff like that. Other then that its really good ^^