@LoLoLaLoco:

I haven't written out any recent stories for her. But I original posted all her stories on the old MyOtaku pages.

This is really good
What site do you post your fanfiction on?

Awesome!!

this origonal charachter of yours is so pretty!!! whats her name?

Wow! That's really awesome! I can never get the clothes to wrincle right, but really, wow! But, like some of the others said, the legs do look kinda rubbery.

Wow, your goon in making the dress complicated! keep up the good work!

She reminds of Kanzeon Bosatsu from Saiyuki. ^_^ Cery interesting pic! I really like it! Awesome job! ^^

Pretty good over all. The coloring is great. The only thing that I can see that is really wrong are the legs. Their to long. Also, as RaidensMetal said, the top one is rubbery.

i like it but, then leg ontop of the pther ;eg, sorta looks rubbery other then dat itz good

I like your fan fiction charecter. She has some reall suffistication. my friends fan fiction charecters look like crap seriously. i give two thumbs up keep up the good work. Raidens Metal