You chose a pretty shocking scene...a tough one in my opinion! Nice work! ^.^

wow this is cool i can't really give you much advise because i have only drawn him twice and i think it's perfect!! :D

lol yeah ed lost his leg first ^^ not his arm, he lost his arm after bringing al bad lol buts its good ^^ i think if he had a noise it would look better.

w00t very good hehe hmmmmm yep its good im not the best artes but i do think there is only one thing you need is more detail in the shirt but that about it ^^ keep it up

Looks good for your first picture. For advice, you might want to put a little more detail into it and draw some more poses besides just the sad one. ^^