It's a good picture, bu I would like to suggest that you carefully study kishmoto's artwork. You'll note that everything is angular. If you can work on that I think it will look wicked!

this is good.. but the only thng is that u need 2 work on the hands. i have problems with that 2.

WOW...if i'm right...it's from when Kakashi-sensei was a genin!! O.O