Aurion, if you were talking to me, here is what I have to say: Believe me, I would put up my own art, but I have no machine to do so.

I do not like it. I basically liked it until I got to the faces of the characters. The detail on the faces are not good, and the shading also sucks.

Yay! this is an awesome picture! Your art is getting awesome! well it is getting mega awesome, cause it already is awesome!

Ah! I love it! I think you did an exilent job!^^ I can't wait to see more of your art! Good job^_^=

....O.O Holy. Flipping. Cow. That is, like, the best freaking picture you've ever done!! ^.^ Seriously! Too many good things to say... The coloring on Kalas is cool, and you made gave Raquel a nice effect. :3 Plus that half red, half sky background totally roxors. ;p Keep up teh super awesome work! ^^

Submissions have been acting weird lately.. Very cool! Nice detail and I like the light and dark thing going on. Looks really great!