I think its great but you should make it darker its hard to see but otherwise its great!!

i like this pic its gr8 well keep up the gd work .

oooohh wow,,,i love it ...very nice i love it. i love how you left out the black ...awesome make you think.... of things like 'did i turn off the oven' hehe hehe just kidding.hehe heh. great job ceep it up. may the force (of drawing) be with you.