You did a nice job and a little more work and it will be perfect! Do not listen to Sietou 10 She is probably jealos that she can not draw as good! I know her so I will be sure to tell her to stop with the mean comments just like I have! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND NEVER GIVE UP!!!

This picture is pretty good. Don't give up! With practice you can make it a whole lot better! Please ignore every rude commet you hear or read. Oh Yea, if you read Sietou 10's commet, not of that is true.P.S. SHE IS A TOTAL SLUT!!!

If your drawing it for a story you should have some background in it. Also "Naomi" is a character I havnt heard of before, orginal?