not bad! i see that you did this fast but its great. and the halberd looks like a broom.. sorry

i think ti looks good, as my art past art teacher would say, clean some parts then it would be bettter...i'm not sure if they were just stalling time though^_^;;;;

I like it a lot. Would it be ok if i tweaked it a bit? (for my own amusment, i will not clame credit).

um...i dunno exactly buuut, i think a halberd is an axe with a spear head on top of it. and what you've drawn looks more like a zanbatou, but i could be wrong, well, whatever it is, i like your style. all cool, and edgy. well, peace.