Very nice! I can't wait to see the rest, especially Sailor Mars. ;)

The "black lines above the mouth and underneath the nose" IS the mouth. The shading under the the black lines is the bottom lip. Heaps of other people get confused with that too.

Well...I kinda like the hair and the legs from the knees down I also like the wings...but for the rest...it's not THAT bad...

That is really nice. Especially the blue outline effect u gave. Though i fail to understand wht are the black lines above the mouth and underneath the nose. Other than that its a really cool picture.