Very nice lineart indeed, my only gripe is indeed the lined paper... Otherwise, very nice job

if you learn basic human anatomy, then you can draw anyone! ^_^ it also would've been alot more professional looking if there weren't any notebook paper lines- your drawing isn't bad at all, so give it a nice background and it'll look great :D

WHOA! ur 5 minute pic is better than my 5 hr pic...