It looks good, Logan! The strong points of this work are definitely the head and the coloring. The blood and cuts/burns/smoldered flesh look pretty realistic, the one opened eye looks very detailed and psychotic, and the coloring is great as usual.
The parts you could improve on, in my opinion, are the hips/legs, and the hands, which EAMR already commented on. The hips/legs look a little too narrow and seem just a little oddly curved, especially the way the hips connect to the legs.
Those were the only two things that jumped out at me. Everything else looks really good, and you definitely put a lot of detail into this. Nice work, Logan.
Wow. Now that is some detailed decomposition. O.o
I like the eye that has a pupil in it; making it bloodshot was a nice touch.
Ah, EAMR took the words right out of my mouth about your hands. The fingers are fine, it's just the actual hand itself that you need to work on.
Still, I always like the way you color. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into what color goes where and all that. Good job! ^_^
I would have to agree with Elves about the clothes. Its good to put those kind of details in a drawing so it looks more realistic. ^^
Its still a great zombie though. Ok, now to go see Zombie 10! ^_^
-Rosa
The colors in the face are VERY well done. Certainly looks like it's rotting. The faces of your zombies are always the best part!
Okay, I think I can tell you specifically how to fix your hands...for one, you draw the hands in the same position every time. Try to mix it up a bit to help give the character's different personality traits!
And the main problem I see with the hands is that you're not really drawing the hand itself. It's almost as iff it goes from the fingers straight to the wrist. After the fingers, the hand often is a little slimmer and then slims off even more when it meets the wrist.
I would also recommend putting more detail into the clothes like wrinkles and variation of shadows. You put so much detail into the face and the skin and such that the clothes seem more drab.
There's my critique since you asked for a more detailed one^^ Now, off to the next^_^
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