Hmm.. well I will be constructive. You do need to work on skills a bit. The hands, hands need to be worked on. Out of all the body is good. The pose is good , and the face is good. Hopefully I helped you by being straight up.

What's art without the rum? :P Do you know who this reminds me of? The lead singer in TheRasmus! ^o^ I'm obviously one of their giddy little fans! Great work!

Hey now, thats not bad at all, keep up with the good work, your stuff is a lot more skilled then my own.