....not to be mean but shes obese.....thats not the character...

lol! I think it's great! Really! lol awesome. But the spelling... I'm retarted when it comes to spelling too, I'm like frikin Forrest Gump...

Sorry, but i have to be a little mean, she came out really fat looking... Was that intended????? O_o

Umm, I'm not to fond of it sorry. She seems to be.........what's the word......Fat. and her character is..rather skinney. The head doesn't seem to be even enough with the neck. And...the nose and mouth....scare me a tad. o.o *sweatdrop* sorry. But this has to be one of the first ones I shall have to vote no on

Ah!I think you have definately have potential. All I have to say, and I don't mean to be mean, is work on your body shapes. Other than that you're on the right track! ^__^