favorite pic of them TOGETHER...it's also one of my only's of them together soo... but yes, i'll work on it ~_~

You've got a very good start, but the proportions are all off. No person I've ever seen is that thin when they're standing side-ways. And there's no shape to they're faces, just the part where the nose sticks out. Like I said it's a good start but look it over. ( ifeel bad knowing this is your fav. But critism is what makes improve...~_~)