Not bad. Hmm...I think that his torso is a bit too long. And the face needs some work. But other than that, you did a nice job with this one. ^_^

yeah not bad at all but the hands looks very wierd @.@

Nice job overall. Yeah, I agree with you on the face. Face is the hardest part to draw.. I always screw up on Ichigo's hair whenever I drew him. It'll take practice and you'll get much better later on, but overall nice job!