Thank you for at least tracking my mistakes, esp. the part where you mentioned the teeth. I knew it wouldn't resemble her well, so I'm not surprised that it has such negative points here. To note, this was my first attempt and nothing more. I guess that is why I submitted it in the first place; I knew someone besides me could actually track my mistakes.
Thanks for the hints, Shanny-chan. They should be helpful.
On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/02/06 | Reply
The hair has a good texture and her lips look great. I see what purgatory is talking about. You did a great job drawing the teeth, but perhaps lightening them up might help. They're shaded very darkly and it brings ones attention to that part first. Teeth should just sort of be an afterthough, ya know. Even though she has light hair, bringing out the shadows and details in it might help to counterbalance the darkness around the mouth area. Like you did with her eyes, which are lovely, btw.
I hope the comment helps, I think you have potential to build on. Your shading in general is very nice.
abc kid
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/03/06 | Reply
Dark Phoenix
On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/02/06 | Reply
Purgatory
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/01/06 | Reply