aww, AwesomeDude, don't be so harsh. I love the pic. I think it looks fine

Well, if I may make a suggestion, you may wanna' work on your proportions. The length of the arms compared to the length of the legs as well as the width of the waist look a bit off. Plus, you may also want to work on your eyes. Her eyes look kind of dull and unfocused. Well-detailed, focused eyes are a necessity for a piece to reach its full potential. However, most everything else looks OK to me. Her choice of outfit is very original, and the colors used contrast each other very well. She looks like a very unique character, and with some minor improvements with the technical aspects she'd look even better. Nicely done, my friend, nicely done. b^_^